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Post by Zane Williams on Mar 19, 2009 5:39:28 GMT -6
PLAYER INFO
Name: Rhys:
Age: 17:
Preferred Way to be Contacted: MSN
CHARACTER INFO
Name: Zane Williams:
Age: 18
Birth Date:January 2,2003
Occupation: Bar Attendant at P3
Type: Witch
Powers: Aquakinesis (Telekinesis which can also include ice effects), Empathy and Astral Projection.
Highly skilled in martial arts.
Affiliation: Good
DESCRIPTION
Physical Description: Good looking male, sharing traits with his brother (brunette, green eyes).
Style: Likes the casual style, not too formal, but nicely dressed.
Looks Like: Thomas Dekker
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Likes
Guys
Videogames
Considerate people
Cooking
Reflecting on the past
Romance
Horror Movies
Funny people
Adventurous people
Dislikes
Demons
Mean people
Death
Spiders
Drowning
Personality: He is a bisexual male, interested in males, but at the same time quite reversed; more concerned about others than of himself. He is an extremely considerate man, who loves helping people, now that he has confidence in his magical powers again. He still looks up to his brother, wanting to be as good a witch as him.
AS A STUDENT WAY BACK WHEN
Didn't go to school...was trained and cared for by his brother. He does however love literature. He learnt all needed magical skills from his brother.
HOME LIFE
Residence: Lives in an apartment, close to the Halliwell Mansion.
Family: Unknown, has a deceased half-brother.
➺Nick Williams: He had the powers of Telekinesis, Astral Projection and Telepathy.
History: Once an innocent teen who worked hard to hone his skills, raised in California. His father was a druggie, who left Zane in the care of his older brother, Nick, after his mother was killed. His best friend in life, and his rolemodel, his older brother, Nick, was then murdered by a powerful demon. Zane was experiencing difficulty controlling his new power of empathy at the time, where he was emotionally unstable and unable to assist his brother, still today blaming himself for his death. After his brothers death, he was all alone, having to fend for himself at the younge age of 17. He is now seeking revenge on this demon, and he is more focused than ever. Once his brother died, he inherited the power of Astral Projection, which he found hard to handle at first, but became one his most prominant powers.
SAMPLE WRITING:
The silent man walked slowly down the ally, glimpsing cautiously behind him, seemingly prepared, yet at the same time unprepared for what he knew he was searching for. He wanted to cry...Just shed tears to make it all go away, but he knew it wouldn't....It couldn't, he told himself.
As he approached the corner, he heard a noise which started him. He had already shown weakness to the darkness...Was he ready for this? He smiles, then turns around. "I've been waiting along time for this..." It was now or never....He could feel his anger, at the same time, he was able to feel the surging confidence of his enemy. He blasted his demon foe, but missed. He was focused....ready....He began to invision within his mind all the pain this demon caused to him. He pulled out a sword and took a shot at his foe, but missed, allowing him to be stabbed.
A frantic scream, as he jumps up from his cheap, but comfortable couch. It was just a dream.....just a dream...he told himself. But was it? He knew he still wasn't ready...
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Post by Headmistress Alexis on Mar 19, 2009 12:45:11 GMT -6
I really like this, and it would be acceptable except that no Halliwell characters that aren't on the needed list (kids of Halliwells) or the Charmed Ones themselves are allowed and Wyatt, Chris, and Henry Jr. are the only males. Plus, that Patty had a fling twice kind of sounds a little weird. Patty and Victor were split up when she had her affair with her whitelighter. Is there a way to change his bio and not have him be a Halliwell? Basically, take out those parts and add in anything extra to make up for it and he would work.
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Post by Zane Williams on Mar 19, 2009 22:36:36 GMT -6
Yeah I understand, it took my hours trying to figure out a way to make him a halliwell so I had to try and squeeze him in as a fling lol. But its okay, I'll edit it  |
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Post by Headmistress Alexis on Mar 20, 2009 0:17:03 GMT -6
Let's see...
1. "Occupation: Professor of Advanced Telekinesis" - he can't be a professor at the age of 18. Did you want him to be a student or a professor? A student would be 18 or younger, but a professor would be probably in their 30s+ at least in looks. Also, if he is a professor, I'd like instead of "Advanced Telekinesis" if it could be "Overall Telekinesis" or some such for beginners and advanced students.
2. "Powers: Aquakinesis (Telekinesis which can also include ice effects), Empathy and Projection." - Aquakinesis is good and even Empathy, however the Projection isn't. No one has this skill in the game, not even Billie anymore. You can take this out and put in another passive power.
3. "➺Nick Williams: He had the powers of Telekinesis, Astral Projection and Projection." - this would work if you took out the Projection, you could put something else there, but not that.
Otherwise, the bio is fab and workable, and love the audition.
Lemme know!
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Post by Zane Williams on Mar 20, 2009 3:03:28 GMT -6
Okay, edited Can I just ask why Projection is unavailable? And yeah, I wont be a professor or a student Btw, I edited my celeb person to Thomas Dekker out of Terminator...I believe he is more fitting for the type of person I want to look like. |
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Post by Headmistress Alexis on Mar 20, 2009 3:13:12 GMT -6
That works and the power of projection is REALLY powerful, basically you can make anything you want reality or happen or make others do things, etc, and that's too powerful for any character to have. Even Billie, who had it on the show, we are making not have it because it was taken away from her because of her evil doings with her sister till she "earns" it back (which won't be in the game).
As for your edits, they are great, just one thing, if you want him 18 and he is a witch, why don't you want him as a student since though it will have to do with outside stuff, the main part of the RPG is in Magic School, where 18 yr olds will be too (17/18 yr olds are Seniors)...
Lemme know, thanks!
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Post by Zane Williams on Mar 20, 2009 3:16:09 GMT -6
I just feel its not in his character to start up magic school...I want him to have that whole...'My brother taught me all I need to know' attitude lol. It sounds weird and confusing so yeah lol. I wanna be like the Billie character..always there to help but didnt go to school.
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Post by Headmistress Alexis on Mar 20, 2009 3:19:01 GMT -6
Well, if you want him there to help, and such, then he'd need to be older and maybe teach a class, because otherwise, as young as he is, at 18, he should be going to Magic School. Billie is older now so she is teaching a class at Magic School.
Otherwise, if he isn't a teacher or a student, during the time they are all at Magic School, your going to be missing out on a lot of RPing. Its different for demons, some will be posing as students at Magic School and others in the Underworld doing plans or whatever but... for good magical beings, they'd have to be older and have rping with other adults mortal or otherwise and/or teaching a class or classes at Magic School to get interaction. Unless they are 14-18 and then they'd go to Magic School.
Hope this makes sense.
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Post by Zane Williams on Mar 20, 2009 3:24:14 GMT -6
Yeah it does, thanks for your help  . Is there any other types of roles available, such as someone who helps out students with their problems. What I am trying to say is, for example in a school there is a librarian. He doesnt teach people, but he is there in the sidelines with a role he plays out, but is still involved. Any ideas? Lol. Sorry im such a hassle. |
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Post by Headmistress Alexis on Mar 20, 2009 3:30:27 GMT -6
You are NOT a hassle, at all =)
And of course there is =)
We could have a librarian and/or a "guidance councilor" or something like that. If it was the last, then if you wanted to be 18 (though maybe 19 or 20, just a big older would be better than the oldest students there) you could be a type of councilor that was around the kids ages so they'd feel more relaxed and such coming to one. If you were a librarian, I think you'd need training, lol. Not so much if you were a councilor that was their age, or around it, more like a mentor but that could be your title.
Btw, invite/recruit anyone you think might be interested! We need a TON more people!
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Post by Zane Williams on Mar 20, 2009 3:33:05 GMT -6
Yeah, not too sure about the idea of a boring librarian ROFL. I was thinking of the mentor as well, I like that one And I would be happy to tip my age to 19 for that posistion |
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Post by Headmistress Alexis on Mar 20, 2009 3:37:50 GMT -6
19 would be better, yeah. Either 19 or 20 since the oldest there will be 18 (in psychical ages unless their demons posing).
So add in your occupation, and your new age (with a change of year on the birthdate) and I'll add you to the character list.
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Post by Zane Williams on Mar 20, 2009 3:41:20 GMT -6
Okay done. Cant wait till rolepplay starts |
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Post by Headmistress Alexis on Mar 20, 2009 3:47:35 GMT -6
thanks! hopefully others will come and join and if you know anyone, feel free to invite em!
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Post by Zane Williams on Mar 20, 2009 3:49:15 GMT -6
I really don't know too many people who like charmed, and if they found out I was roleplaying as a gay character, I would be screwed lol  |
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