Sakura Rahl
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My husband may be evil, but I am not.
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Post by Sakura Rahl on Mar 17, 2009 17:50:20 GMT -6
Name: sakurarahl Age: 24 Preferred Way to be Contacted: PM
CHARACTER INFO
Name: Sakura Rahl Age: Looks Early 20's Birth Date: True Year Unknown, but has an ID with: February 14th, 1998. Deathdate: NA Occupation: Professor of History of Dark Magic. Type: Immortal Witch. Powers: ACTIVE: Energy Manipulation. INACTIVE: The ability to make anyone tell the truth by touching them and looking them in the eye. Affiliation: Good.
DESCRIPTION Physical Description: 5' 4", black/brown hair, pale skin, blue eyes with no pupils. Style: Gothic and Renaissance. Looks Like: Billie Piper
Personality: Likes: Celtic music, fruit, berries, and juice. Dislikes: Abuse of one's powers, dark corners, Attitude towards life: Has been somewhat cynical since her husband died, but has changed slowly since she met Melinda Warren when Melinda was a little girl. Likes to face things head on, so she is not afraid of confrontation. How their personality affects their daily decisions: She has a twisted sense of humor, so she makes her students laugh by doing a pretty fair imitation of Professor Snape. She often plays music during the 'quiet' times in class, when she isn't vocally quizzing the students, so that they have a comfortable environment to work in, like during tests or midterms. Isn't afraid to tell the Elders off if she doesn't like a decision they made.
SCHOOL LIFE
AS A STUDENT WAY BACK WHEN Never went to Magic School. She was invited, but her Guardian despised Magic School.
HOME LIFE
Residence: A penthouse in San Francisco. Significant Other: Husband Deceased. Family: Daughter Deceased.
➺Father: Unknown. ➺Mother: Unknown. ➺Siblings: None. ➺Spouse: D. Rahl, 30, Unknown, Deceased. ➺Children: Asha, 16, unknown, deceased. ➺None:
History: (Please include - where they grew up and with who, where they live now, who they live with, how long they have gone to magic school, what they are good [and bad!] at, what they like to do in free time, who their friends are, etc)
There wasn't really a name for the country she lived in back then, but in the modern time, it could be labeled as England. Her village was in the deep country and her husband's home, or where it once stood, was deep within a wooded area. She moved from England after her husband and daughter's death, moving to Eire, or Ireland as it's called today, to live as a priestess for the druids, teaching young women to be priestesses and young men to be the apprentice's of the druid priests. She lives only with her familiar, a beautiful Egyptian Mau that she named after her husband. She never got to go to Magic School, her Guardians thinking that her Powers were evil and that she should be punished, so when she had been invited to come to Magic School and learn, they declined. She is very good with a computer and was once classified as a Hacker during the 1970's. She cannot, for the life of her, knit or sew. She likes to rent dvds and order pizza when she's got a day off. She likes to go to P3 during the holidays or magical holidays, like Wyatt Halliwell's birthday. She doesn't really have any friends, just acquaintances from Magic School or those she meets in the magical market. Any Extra Information: NA
SAMPLE WRITING:
Sakura, or Kura as she was called now, sat down at her table, enjoying the environment that P3 was creating. She sipped her drink and listening to the flowing and haunting music. It was St. Patrick's day, so they were playing Celtic music and the like.
"This is for you, my love," She whispered to herself, holding the locket her husband gave her in one hand, while holding the drink in her other.
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Post by Headmistress Alexis on Mar 17, 2009 17:57:23 GMT -6
Very nice bio =) There are a few things that may need to be changed, however.
The class you want her to teach - right now there is no class for that, no students and I'm not sure there ever will be - is it possible for her to teach as class we need a teacher for definitely (see "characters needed" page for that)?
Also, her "inactive" power - most people have active/passive powers and only people who are young usually have inactive powers that they haven't come in to yet, plus that power is kinda extra powerful so maybe you could give her a passive power?
Next, she can't be immortal, she wouldn't be a witch then. Elders are more or less immortal, Cupids, but not witches.
You also forgot the "History" part.
Last, for her audition, can you expand on it a bit more?
Thanks! Lemme know what you think of these changes / when any of them are done and I'll re-look at it!
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